Evaluation: What have you learned from your audience feedback?

I got a lot of useful audience feedback, and this will be applied to any further projects.

1. Have more spoken parts - There is very little dialog in my film, and this created a barrier between the audience and the characters, making it difficult for them to empathise with the storyline.

2. Keep consistent lighting - Due to the filming being done in winter, the shots filmed later on in the day are quite dark in comparison to other shots. Also due to the first scene being done in the middle of the day, the curtain had to be closed to stop camera glare. This made the scene very dark and not very professional looking.

3. Smoother cuts between scenes - The editing makes some cuts very choppy, and not very clear. There are also some missing shots that make watching it difficult, and stop the creation of any verisimilitude.